l†‡Blaze‡†l
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 30, 2007 19:03:50 GMT -5
Well I just thought of a cool plot. Okay so this is how it goes-->
Theres about 4 or 5 cats, that absolutley hate the clans, and how they just . . . are. So its not a realll clan, but its like a gang. More and more cats agree until theres about 10 or so cats, then they rebel aganst a clan [not all 4 clans, just 1] but fail or something. So ten more cats come, more kits and stuff, then they rebel aganst ALL 4 clans, and . . .
Ending 1[short]--> cats in the mini-clan get defeated, plot just ends.
Ending 2[long]--> cats in mini-clan get enough cats where they actually become a clan, plot goes on that way, the mini-clan is just plain mean, always picking fights, goes on and on and on, until the 4 clans get bloodclan too and they all join together and fight the mini-clan and win. mini-clan dies, some warriors live and join the 5 clans [whichever one] and idk some die i guess.
its supposed to take time, so its a good plot if your bored and have nothing else to do. It'll also be really fun! with the random attackings and the secresy and stuff, soo yeah. Hope you like it! give me your thoughts and opinions!!!
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ƒoxclaw
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Post by ƒoxclaw on Jul 30, 2007 19:55:33 GMT -5
Hm. I like it, actually. Though I would like to see something with BloodClan, but since they're unactive.. Anyway, if this plot goes forward, I volunteer to make a cat for the cause. Warrior, kit, or elder- doesn't matter.
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 30, 2007 21:47:09 GMT -5
Well I was planning on them all being warriors for now, like either loners hating the clans, or rouges that ran away from the clans hating the clans, making the mini-clan. i still had'nt exaclty made a great name or nothin for it, so any ideas just tell mehh =P but at the part where the mini-clan gets bigger, then the cats can start having kits and such. but thanks!
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Post by Redfang on Jul 30, 2007 21:50:36 GMT -5
You shouldn't be planing anything yet, Snow hasn't accepted the idea yet.
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 31, 2007 11:24:11 GMT -5
Thats true, I did'nt mean like planning-knowing-she'll-accept-it, Just if she does accept it, I know what to do. Err so does everyone else if they want to do the plot. But yes Redfang your right, sorry for the mis-leading info.
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Post by [White n' Nerdeh] on Jul 31, 2007 11:49:06 GMT -5
Hm... I don't know. It sounds sort of... cliche, you know what I mean? like on every site there are evil rogues making a band. But see.. BloodClan is that band of evil cats. Maybe if we twisted this plot around a bit, then it could work. I'm gonna think of an idea.
Random Thoughts List (don't nessicarily make sens DX)
-There is a leader that gets possessed by a CloudClan spirit, then decides to join up with BoodClan and then eventually (of course) ShadowClan would join, leaving only two clans to fight them...
-There is a huge forbidden love thingy going on. There could be love between two leaders, they have kits.. then the two clans kind of combne into one, sharing territory and such... and then the leader of another clan falls for the leader of BloodClan, then they join up. And then the other clan is smack in the middle of it all.... and eventually splits up. Then there is this huge battle thingy.
-With the kittens of the leader thing again, those kittens could become feirce rivals with the kits of the BloodClan leader and the other leader.
-still thinking...
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
You lied to me, saying everything would be okay..
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 31, 2007 12:09:22 GMT -5
I like your first and second idea, is there a way we can.. kinda combine them? I like them!
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Post by [White n' Nerdeh] on Jul 31, 2007 12:24:25 GMT -5
Thanks ^^; Yeah I guess we could... so here...
The leader of ---Clan and the leader of --Clan fall in love. They have kits, and the leaders draw their clans to each other to form one clan, with a huge ammount of territory. The other clan are not impressed. Then, surprisingly, the leader of --Clan and the leader of BloodClan fall in love, and they have kits. And like the other two clans, they form into one as well. Now there is only one clan left in the forest, but things are not at all well for them. The leader has been possessed by a CloudClan spirit, and that clan splits away from their crazed leader to join one of the two clans. Eventually, there is a huge war going on about what's what...
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 31, 2007 13:19:06 GMT -5
mhhm! I love it!
--> possible ending [?idk?] -- before the war at the end, [kinda ties in with the original plot] but a few cats join together, and aid --Clan [whichever is the err.. most like.. one that follows the warrior code] then.. idk drifts from there?
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Post by [White n' Nerdeh] on Jul 31, 2007 14:54:30 GMT -5
Ok, yeah sure
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 31, 2007 14:57:51 GMT -5
cool!!
so uh.. when should it start xD
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Post by [White n' Nerdeh] on Jul 31, 2007 15:09:52 GMT -5
Welllllllllll... Technically we need all people to approve of this
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l†‡Blaze‡†l
Kit
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Post by l†‡Blaze‡†l on Jul 31, 2007 15:51:50 GMT -5
all as in every member, or all as in all staff?
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Post by [White n' Nerdeh] on Jul 31, 2007 16:17:31 GMT -5
Well most of the members have to agree/have a say in it.
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ƒoxclaw
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Post by ƒoxclaw on Aug 1, 2007 18:29:22 GMT -5
-raises hand- I'm not sure if I grasp the concept here. Also, BloodClan's leader is Nieve. I've emailed her, since she hasn't posted since she made her bio. If she doesn't reply soon, or doesn't post, I'm going to ask to try out for the position.
I'm not saying 'no' to your ideas, if I do become the leader. But please explain them a bit better to me. Is some possessed cat going to join BloodClan.. Then take it over? -is lost-
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